Ticket
Title: Apollo Lee – Ticket
Date: January 31, 2008
Software: Logic Pro 8
Genre: Ambient
Timing: 5:06 @ 40 bpm
What I Like About It
- The aftertouch on this instrument is nice.
- There are some beautiful bass note entrances.
- Airy suspensions happen frequently here.
What I Don’t Like About It
- Too many three-note or whole chord transitions at too high a frequency.
- The train conductor interrupted me at 5:00. “Ticket. I need to see your ticket.” (Hence, the title and the abrupt ending.)
- The chords don’t linger long enough to make use that beautiful background bell thing in the aftertouch.
- The way I used the tones here is a little boring sometimes, a little jarring sometimes.
- Some of the note entrances are too heavy.
- The mix down is too hot.
Note: These are rough drafts. Constructive criticism is welcomed, of course.
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